What to Do?

Baijayanti Pradhan on Jul 19, 2011

What to do? I don’t know…

This is not in my luck

but i’m interested in it

then what can I do

which house should I knock?

* * *

I’m not getting it easily

but i know a stong desire

a strong determination

can one day leads to success.

* * *

Till now i’m not getting success

still then i’m struggling

to succeed what I want

by ignoring what astrologers say.

– The End -

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Dreamy777 on Jul 19, 2011
great poem
Eunice Tan on Jul 19, 2011
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN
Christine Ramsay on Jul 19, 2011
Persevere and you will get there in the end. A well expressed poem.
Vivek Ratan on Jul 19, 2011
you write a line
in it a feeling you combine
when it publishes
my dear you shine
success is not money
its how beautifully you use your time
a lot is there to do
smile and present your view

Very good poem,Baijayanti
megamatt09 on Jul 19, 2011
Very intriguing sentiments expressed.
Cassle Tang on Jul 19, 2011
Some people say that when astrologers say good things, then believe it. When they say bad things, try your best to change it.
CA Johnson on Jul 19, 2011
This is very interesting. As long as you keep trying, you will succeed. Thanks for sharing.
LCM Linda on Jul 19, 2011
Interesting poem. Hope you will enjoy success soon.
Martin Kloess on Jul 20, 2011
very good.
DR.VNS on Jul 20, 2011
Well written.
princess yuna on Jul 20, 2011
nice poem
erwinkennythomas on Jul 21, 2011
nice post!
Raj the Tora on Jul 23, 2011
no astrology can decide our fate. Do not fall victim to it
R K Vajpeyi on Jul 25, 2011
Cute one!
Tulan on Jul 25, 2011
A good attitude.
beingwell on Jul 25, 2011
Keep the faith!
Netty net on Sep 5, 2011
I like it. strong feeling at tug a war. nice one

Hi there!