What to Do When I’m The One …… (Haiku)

aisha jamal on Jan 8, 2012

Tags: Cry, Haiku, hurt, Poetry, Reason

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You Don’t know how hurting it is!
when I see tears in your eyes.

I want to kill the person responsible for it!
But what to do when I am the one the reason for it??????

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Comments (6)

Vinaya says good bye on Jan 8, 2012
Though your haiku does not follow the traditional pattern of 5-7-5 syllables, I enjoyed your composition.
Martin Kloess on Jan 8, 2012
interesting – message
vardhanh71 on Jan 9, 2012
nice……….
aisha jamal on Jan 10, 2012
xphantoms on Jan 10, 2012
Like it,
girishpuri on Jan 31, 2012
i like it , but i am not that person…lol

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