About “Lover’s Quarrels” and dedicated to a dear friend.

What took you so long
to call me “love?
What took you so long
to say “I love you”?
Aren’t you afraid
that one morning
you’ll wake up
and find that
I am gone?

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  • Dee Gold on Feb 19, 2009

    short but nice

  • Unofre Pili on Feb 19, 2009

    Buti ka pa dyan bro, may nag mamahal…Lol.

  • Debra. on Feb 19, 2009

    Short but sweet!

  • valli on Feb 19, 2009

    sweet and nice poem.

  • clay hurtubise on Feb 19, 2009

    True love developes like an old polaroid snapshot!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Betty Carew on Feb 19, 2009

    Beautiful poem nobert

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 19, 2009

    I loved that Nobert.

    Christine

  • PR Mace on Feb 19, 2009

    Well written with a good flow of words. Don’t be afraid of love, my friend.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 19, 2009

    Haha..this poem is cute!

  • Lee Altman on Feb 19, 2009

    thumbs up

  • papaleng on Feb 19, 2009

    batsit quet napintas Ading. short but beautiful.. Love it bro..

  • Auron Renius on Feb 19, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 19, 2009

    traffic… cute poem..

  • Blue Buttefly on Feb 19, 2009

    Oh, so cute. Love it!

  • S Air on Feb 19, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • Moses Ingram on Feb 19, 2009

    Nice poem, Thanks for sharing.

  • lindalulu on Feb 19, 2009

    Short and sweet and very nice!

  • Juancav on Feb 19, 2009

    Moving poem,in others words : Why I was not your first love?

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 19, 2009

    My friend Nobert Soloria Bermosa, that was a simple, yet very provoking piece, and that is what makes it interesting and provoking at the same time. You always do it so well.

    AC

  • Maria Blazz on Feb 19, 2009

    Brief but straight to the point.

  • miraj on Feb 20, 2009

    Hi,

    simple and powerful,I like poems of such nature.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,nobert
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • Nieron on Feb 20, 2009

    Short but full of meaning!!!

  • Joe Dorish on Feb 20, 2009

    Yes

  • denus on Feb 20, 2009

    brilliant!

  • Judy Sheldon on Feb 20, 2009

    Pretty and heart felt.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 21, 2009

    Expresses the tragic side of love very well!!

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 23, 2009

    Brilliant expressed in so few words

  • xoxo on Feb 26, 2009

    Hey, this is very cute and soooo true :)

  • She Bear on Mar 29, 2009

    Nice poem, straight to the point!

  • Cynthia J on Jul 10, 2009

    No one should take their loved ones for granted.
    Excellent write here Nobert.
    Well done.
    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
    *S* Cynthia

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Jul 17, 2009

    That’s to the point! Brian

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