Very well written.Keep it up

Most people are only in it for themselves.. and want to control others, beat others, and so forth.. we need to support each other if we want to succeed too… but few people see it that way.

Nicely done, as always, Jerry!

Thanks to you Sanataryal , Brenda and Edsss for commenting.

try an expanding contracting poem

well expressed

i can relate to this very well.. people will try to control us but we were were born in our bodies for a reason

You are trully gifted when it comes to expression of feelings!!

I enjoy reading this one, very profound keep writing beautiful words

I feel like analyzing this poem line by line; it’s so full of meaning. Everyone believes they are right so they try to make others see from their own point of view. Everybody has a right to their opinion, just don’t impose it on others

Thanks everyone for your comments.

I agree with you. We should make our lives something to be proud of.

good job

You have packed so much meaning into this – we could all take a moment and examine ourselves and our purpose. Well done.

Thanks oh gang o mine! Much appreciated!

We must wait and see. Questions raise so much awareness. Nicely done and thank you for waking up my mind.

Thank you for sharing your talent in the form of poetry with us all.

Very remarkable poem about Freedom. The style of the poem is very lucid and spontaneous.

Thank you Peace Poet.

Very thought provoking – nice share.

…..Beautifully written.

Thank you Louise…