When Idealistic Egyptian kind of king and queen lovers albeit of a most modern generation. poem written without any thought automatically in ten minutes or so involuntarily.


When

 

 

When two hearts meet

The world ceases 

Time halts for a while

And heaaaaart throbs stop

The end of the world appears

In ones thoughts

And the simplicity of love

Is enwrapped in the silkiness

Of minds fantasy.

Then one speaks out

Albeit softly

Hark can you hear me?

With a choked voice

The other says

Yes,

Do you hear me?

 

The world seems

To have been lost

In a dream of fantasy

A moment of ecstasy

Creeps down the spine

And the whole body

Warps

Entwines

 

Then suddenly

Clouds burst

Upon each one

The fires

Burn beneath

Like an oven

Its then that one visualises

The scourge of death

One with out the other

The world would’ve wept

 

Upon my soul lay

Let time pass

Over our united forms

Just any way

Let us

Unitedly

Be embalmed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Jan 16, 2010

    side effects of love…well written :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 16, 2010

    LIFE\S REALITIES MUST BE EXPECTED

  • cardy on Jan 16, 2010

    Wow you’re really pulling out all the stops loved this!!!

  • Ranjan Mathews on Jan 16, 2010

    Body unto body
    And soul unto soul
    Death telescopes everybody
    Life alas surrenders whole.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 16, 2010

    great poem LH

  • yes me on Jan 16, 2010

    Happy run to this

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