…how much longer must I wait?

You said “I love you”

I said “I know”

You said “Wait”

I almost said “Yes” but

I´ve been waiting for the longest time.

I say “When?”

Vous avez dit “Je t’aime”
J’ai dit “Je sais”
   Vous avez dit “Attendez”
J’allais dire “Oui” mais
j’ai attendu le plus longtemps.
Je dis “quand?”

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  • Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 12, 2009

    C’est formidable! This was a great little poem, very creative!I like how you added the french!

  • AlmaG on Nov 13, 2009

    I can relate to this…

  • drelayaraja on Nov 15, 2009

    Wonderful use of words.

  • mistymorrning on Apr 8, 2010

    the ultimate question “when”…we long for the answer..thank you :)

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