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nice

An interesting view of death and loss. It’s not sad at all.

Please excuse the errors in my previous comment

Ceegirl,
Very short and to the point. It really something that gets a person to thinking. Excellent job!!! Keep up the great work.

Randy

Great job, ceegirl. I like the message you gave us about death. I will think about this when I think of people who are no longer with us.

Very good poem and imagery. good job!

This is really wonderful, creative and very interesting poem about “life after death”..lol..well done my friend..well-presented

Nice piece….

very touching

You Just put something in my heart. My Mother said to me Do Not Stand At My Grave And Cry. To This Day. I can’t Stand it. Going to the Grave Yard. I still cry, but not there I do not know maybe because she said it. I don’t. But, I do cry. .
Thanks for sharing.

A nice way to look at the term, good work and pictures.

wonderful…thanks for the share

Wonderful poem ^_^

Touches the heart.

well done.

Good piece…

A solid “Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep” tone… Good job!

I share your poetic philosophy. Welll done.

Sweet words for those that love you! Good poem. Thanks for sharing.

Liked the poem. : )

A poignant and beautiful read.

Christine

Very similar to “Do not stand at my grave and weep”.

Good stuff.;)

Very nice, a great view on life and death

Very inspiring poem.

nice and touchy poem
u have touched me deep down with this poem..

A great piece

Touching poem.

Excellent write!!!!!

Very meaningful words.

Remember me like I was in your present

I’m only here in the desert.

—> I love that lines…

Birth and Death are the same door Ceegirl, Excellent!!

Deep and wonderfully written.

I like what you do to present your poems; they look so lovely on the screen. This poem is good, and I agree whith the thought expressed here; don`t cry for me when I am gone.

interesting piece. Good work.

Well written. A genuine desire for those we leave behind.

I like your poem. Thanks for sharing.

heart touching poem, great work.

Very nice.

How true!!!!

Wow… Very interesting!

Wow, touching poem. Thanks for sharing

Very meaningful, Thanks

Appreciate the intent of your message…I’d invite you to also read “My Farewell Invitation” – I think you might find a similar sentiment. Thanks for writing and sharing

Ha, I don’t know if I can not cry if someone just died. Nice poem.

Very interesting. Well written, good job.

Great pictures and very well written.

Touching work.

Hey CeeGirl Luv Your Stories!!!:)

No one shall grieve
On my death,
For its imminent,
When it happens
Don’t shed a tear
‘Twill tears me apart
Don’t sprinkle water
I hated a bath

Don’t inform anyone
I have neither kith nor kin
Worthy of such
Happy information
They will shed tears,
Just to show and know
What they shared in my Will,

So let me be consumed
By the natural fires
Take me not home
Just let me smoulder away.
As my ashes become cold
Let them be stowed
Under the freshly falling snow

Let no one come and say
L.H. Has gone away
For I shall henceforth
In all your loving hearts
For ever and ever shall stay.

Never say die,
For I shall live
As the breeze blows
I shall like a fragrance
Of a rose
Come by still