Comments on: When I Die http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/ Fri, 01 Jun 2012 20:23:29 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: lovelyhoney http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1048475 lovelyhoney Tue, 08 Dec 2009 03:09:32 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1048475 No one shall grieve On my death, For its imminent, When it happens Don’t shed a tear ‘Twill tears me apart Don’t sprinkle water I hated a bath Don’t inform anyone I have neither kith nor kin Worthy of such Happy information They will shed tears, Just to show and know What they shared in my Will, So let me be consumed By the natural fires Take me not home Just let me smoulder away. As my ashes become cold Let them be stowed Under the freshly falling snow Let no one come and say L.H. Has gone away For I shall henceforth In all your loving hearts For ever and ever shall stay. Never say die, For I shall live As the breeze blows I shall like a fragrance Of a rose Come by still No one shall grieve
On my death,
For its imminent,
When it happens
Don’t shed a tear
‘Twill tears me apart
Don’t sprinkle water
I hated a bath

Don’t inform anyone
I have neither kith nor kin
Worthy of such
Happy information
They will shed tears,
Just to show and know
What they shared in my Will,

So let me be consumed
By the natural fires
Take me not home
Just let me smoulder away.
As my ashes become cold
Let them be stowed
Under the freshly falling snow

Let no one come and say
L.H. Has gone away
For I shall henceforth
In all your loving hearts
For ever and ever shall stay.

Never say die,
For I shall live
As the breeze blows
I shall like a fragrance
Of a rose
Come by still

]]> By: Linziex18 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1041297 Linziex18 Thu, 03 Dec 2009 23:06:38 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1041297 Hey CeeGirl Luv Your Stories!!!:) Hey CeeGirl Luv Your Stories!!!:)

]]> By: Snuggles85 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1040376 Snuggles85 Thu, 03 Dec 2009 13:48:37 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1040376 Touching work. Touching work.

]]> By: deklin42 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1035613 deklin42 Tue, 01 Dec 2009 04:04:51 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1035613 Great pictures and very well written. Great pictures and very well written.

]]> By: ProfThot http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1028665 ProfThot Thu, 26 Nov 2009 18:52:23 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1028665 Very interesting. Well written, good job. Very interesting. Well written, good job.

]]> By: Literati http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1023901 Literati Tue, 24 Nov 2009 06:39:56 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1023901 Ha, I don't know if I can not cry if someone just died. Nice poem. Ha, I don’t know if I can not cry if someone just died. Nice poem.

]]> By: jimbob1 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1020127 jimbob1 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 05:52:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1020127 Appreciate the intent of your message...I'd invite you to also read "My Farewell Invitation" - I think you might find a similar sentiment. Thanks for writing and sharing Appreciate the intent of your message…I’d invite you to also read “My Farewell Invitation” – I think you might find a similar sentiment. Thanks for writing and sharing

]]> By: Authoress Terry E. Lyle http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1019953 Authoress Terry E. Lyle Sun, 22 Nov 2009 03:34:25 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1019953 Very meaningful, Thanks :) Very meaningful, Thanks :)

]]> By: Liz Sapphire http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1019395 Liz Sapphire Sat, 21 Nov 2009 19:08:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1019395 Wow, touching poem. Thanks for sharing Wow, touching poem. Thanks for sharing

]]> By: Rinks Desai http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/comment-page-1/#comment-1018413 Rinks Desai Sat, 21 Nov 2009 05:53:13 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/when-i-die-7/#comment-1018413 Wow… Very interesting! Wow… Very interesting!

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