This is a poem, that shows my belief in my country for the United States of America.

When I Look At the Flag

When I look at the flag,

It reminds me of you.

You fought for this country

With pride and hope

You protected this land

With compassion and love.

You never gave up

Even when every was hopeless.

When you fought,

You had a reason,

You cried

Because you missed your love ones.

When you came home,

Everyone was in tears,

Hugging and praising

Is what they did.

When I look at the flag,

It reminds me of you.

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  • babygirl3605 on Jun 5, 2010

    This is very nice for all that fights for our USA

  • Emmie on Jun 6, 2010

    Hey,

    I am not from the USA but if i had to support a country other than my own it would be the USA. A good article.

    Emmie

  • Leet413 on Jun 6, 2010

    nice poem. sure is better then what i can come up with haha,

    hey, you wanna help me out with some views? i liked your articles want to do the same back?

  • cwatenpool on Jun 6, 2010

    Leet413:
    Yeah sure

  • Alex on Jun 6, 2010

    nice job, i really like it. keep up the good writing

  • Weaches on Jun 7, 2010

    Wow, that was an amazing poem, it made me think of one of the ones that a professional would write, I loved it, two thumbs up

  • JoeKL on Jun 14, 2010

    Shame i cant like this more than once really ;-)

    Great poem, it really gets to you.

  • SUPERARTIST on Jun 14, 2010

    worth reading
    5 stars!

  • Trey on Jun 20, 2010

    great job

  • Cindy on Jun 20, 2010

    Amazing and heart warming! I love it

  • GWitt on Jul 19, 2010

    Awesome

  • twincapes on Jul 22, 2010

    Very nice, I have a son in the military. It doesn’t matter what country they are from, it is always tough for those back home. thanks-

  • Elizabeth Marion on Jul 25, 2010

    I liked it, except for the line “Even when every was hopeless”. I assume you were trying to say “everyone”. Otherwise, very well done.
    ~Eliza

  • Elritz Gallo on Aug 8, 2010

    this is full of heart indeed. thanks for sharing. but its kinda uneasy to read…but its good though

  • JB3261 on Aug 20, 2010

    Cool, nice poem. Check out some of my articles.

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