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When I Look at You

Papa Sparks on Apr 30, 2009
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Another poem for my son Jeremy Aaron.

When I look at you

cradled in my arms,

I see all that is perfect

wonderful and beautiful

in this world.

And I know by the way

you look up at me

as you grasp my finger

with your tiny hand

that you feel the same.

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  • kate smedley on Apr 30, 2009

    Wonderful tribute for your child …

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Apr 30, 2009

    Simple, elegant communion.
    That child is adorable, by the way. He has a look of wisdom in his eyes.

  • Papa Sparks on May 1, 2009

    Thank you so much for the kind comments.

  • Denise Kawaii on May 1, 2009

    So sweet. Your son is adorable, and your love for him shines through.

  • K Kristie on May 5, 2009

    Reminds me of the same feelings when my son was the same age as yours. What a beautiful child you have.

  • LANESHA on May 8, 2009

    this poem displays true love between parent and child

  • CutestPrincess on May 18, 2009

    i can feel your joy having a child through your words…

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