When I Look in Your Eyes

Svetlana Cherevik on Nov 29, 2009

Tags: Eyes, glance, love, Lyrics

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Poem.

When I look in your eyes

Do not be embarrassed

I am not to entice

But to love and to cherish

If my light is your light

You are to take the lead

I’ve shown it all in my eyes

For you to be able to read

I will not let you go

From my dreams, from my heart

Though you do not seem to know

That you are to start

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cutedrishti8 on Nov 29, 2009
Lovely Poem….I was just going to sleep this was my last poem of the day…
jengriver on Nov 29, 2009
Very sweet poem!Good work!
Frances Lawrence on Nov 29, 2009
A lovely poem, to me it speaks of young love.
Liane Schmidt on Nov 29, 2009
Nice work.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
deep blue on Nov 29, 2009
The ladies have a way of showing and guys obviously have to make the move. Nice thought in here caught by the lines.
AlmaG on Nov 29, 2009
Love poem
Sharif Ishnin on Nov 29, 2009
Lovely and innocent poem.;)
salaam on Nov 29, 2009
I do like what you’ve done here, and the approach to the subject. This is a great subject actually… and one that often starts arguments. But from a man’s point of view… sometimes a womans hint is not as clear as she likes to think it is. Sometimes I’d have to be a psychic in order to read what was going on in the mind of a woman… because sometimes the eyes just don’t tell.
salaam on Nov 29, 2009
btw… I’m assuming ‘entice’ is a typo and should be ‘enticed’.
ashan1614 on Nov 29, 2009
I find that sometimes men are afraid to take the lead. But Salaam is correct in that often what we women think are obvious hints, men are totally oblivious to.
TroostAvenue on Nov 29, 2009
Actually, salaam, I liked ‘entice’, sounded to me more Ukranian somehow. But then Svetlana does far better with English than I could do with Ukranian. This is a very nice poem.
sweet sunshine143 on Nov 29, 2009
Lovely poem. well-done.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 29, 2009
Oh yes, young love is beautiful.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 30, 2009
Aahhh! This is such a sweet and heartfelt poem!
joyhyena29 on Nov 30, 2009
lovely ^^
Phill Senters on Nov 30, 2009
Nice poem. Well done.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 30, 2009
A very sweet and romantic piece.

Christine
coffeeadict on Nov 30, 2009
You created a very nice love poem. I like it.
LOVELY HONEY on Nov 30, 2009
Once you enter
Through my eyes
You will be trapped.

None can help you leave
As my eyes are
A thing of joy for ever
For one to perceive

My eyes are yours,
Cynosure of your eyes
I mean, I am, how any one can
From my eyes ever leave?
mkd1788 on Dec 2, 2009
great feelings u have expressed..
T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 3, 2009
You show lots of feelings in your poems.
writeme on Dec 8, 2009
hahaha very good, its the women that aims the arrows of love, the men just holds the bow…a very good writing….
LOVELY HONEY on Dec 17, 2009
i see ur in my eyes you read my poetry also do read my eyes
Once you enter
Through my eyes
You will be trapped.

None can help you leave
As my eyes are
A thing of joy for ever
For one to perceive

My eyes are yours,
Cynosure of your eyes
I mean, I am, how any one can
From my eyes ever leave?
Tina Cassello on Dec 23, 2009
Today women don’t have to wait for the man to make the first move and most say they appreciate having a woman tell them in a direct way that they find them attractive and would like to get to know them better.

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