When I Need You.

You are there somewhere and I am here
We are far from one another
I feel you so close to my heart
Yet so far coz I can’t feel you
In times I want to hold you

I am missing you
And I know how you are missing me too
But I can’t hold you
In times when I want to

Now that I want to be with you
The days seems so slow
Even the ticks of the clock
That runs so fast when I am not longing for you

When I need you
The clouds darkened
Wanting to pour the rain
Telling me just to wait for the sun
‘coz he will rise to shine

When I need you
The birds are singing
Telling me to wait
Coz you will fulfill as you have promised
To be with me forever

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Comments (11)
  • Ranjan Mathews on Jul 15, 2010

    Arise when needed
    Play when kneaded.

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 15, 2010

    A beautiful and very well-composed poem.

  • yes me on Jul 15, 2010

    Another good poem Obi, cheers

  • krrymarie on Jul 15, 2010

    great poem, know how you feel

  • Tina Cassello on Jul 15, 2010

    This is another nice poem.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 15, 2010

    Hmmmmh, I seem to have re-found what I was missing for quite some time, keep them coming.

  • heidiefernandez on Jul 16, 2010

    loved this poem… Poetry of longing

  • papaleng on Jul 16, 2010

    look who’s talking.. a pure heart deeply in love.

  • Sushant94 on Jul 17, 2010

    i like it

  • drishti8 on Jul 17, 2010

    Great piece of work.

  • prospector68 on Aug 13, 2010

    I like your poem. Emotional and heartfelt…

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