If you realize you’re dying, what would you give to your loved ones before your time ends?

When I met you

How beautiful life has become

You drop dews to my wings

When my hope begins to dry

You never deserted my side

Every time my fears threaten me

Your smile fills my mind

When I feel there’s no tomorrow

You sit and listen

When loneliness captures my soul

Your embrace makes me glad

That I don’t see hint of darkness at all

But now that it’s time for me to go

When I can leave you nothing

But memories

I want to burn you with my love

So when I reach the heaven

Your heart won’t feel I’m gone.

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  • amilia snow on Mar 10, 2009

    yes…death is indeed painful because of the separation with the people you love. Just recently, my grandmother has left me. It was horrible, thinking back of the memories made me regret for not spending more time with her.

    Therefore, through her death, I realised that its never to late to act now, treasure your time together & make each moment a special one.

    cheers.

  • amilia snow on Mar 10, 2009

    yes…death is indeed painful because of the separation with the people you love. Just recently, my grandmother has left me. It was horrible, thinking back of the memories made me regret for not spending more time with her.

    Therefore, through her death, I realised that its never to late to act now, treasure your time together & make each moment a special one.

    cheers.

  • Tarra Buluran on Mar 10, 2009

    Thanks a lot! Your kind words have made me inspired to write more. God bless.

  • xenah on Mar 18, 2009

    Do goodness while still living because its the only legacy you can you have when you are gone…. Spending your time with someone is quit a very great thing you can do for anybody…di ba Ms TARRA???

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