When true love has it’s doubts it’s time to make clear what brought you there in the first place.

Hey, You!

She asked her beloved true

Do you want this life?

Do you want this flight?

Just take it one step at a time

Make the dream come alive

Got to go and see it there

Picture it in your mind, don’t say how, just say where

We ran around in different towns

Looking for the right kind of sounds

But it was you

Coming through

All the time and never knew how much

She wasn’t sure, but she could trust

Her feelings had it rough before

But her soul was assured, feared not nevermore

She was right the first time and wasn’t blue

Loving thoughts of him rocked her body and her heart felt so true

She embraced it all and had the look

Clad in lace, nothing stopping her and she took

No one else could

No one would

She looked at the dream

So long waiting she wanted to scream

And said this is it

She wanted to yell and make a fit.

She said aloud

Under dark clouds

You are the one I’ve been looking for

No more doubts or scrambled puzzles on the floor

Your magic just gleams on me forever more

Blinding and beautiful you are thee

Made especially for me

He understood

Came back as he should

She took his hand

And off they ran

Escaping the dire motions

Letting go and embracing their loving emotions

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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  • joyhyena29 on Jan 24, 2010

    great post^^

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 24, 2010

    i shout even if i have no doubt gr888888888 post
    lh

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 24, 2010

    Nice poem

  • Dame Barbara on Jan 25, 2010

    Hey You! Beautiful words.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 25, 2010

    Wow! This is beautiful. Under the dark clouds, you’re the one that I’ve been looking for. There is always a light under the tunnel.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 25, 2010

    great poem

  • ashan1614 on Jan 25, 2010

    I understand her feeling completely. When you finally, FINALLY, find the one you can love and trust, you feel like shouting it out. :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 25, 2010

    This is a lovely piece with such a romantic ending.

    Christine

  • VTech on Jan 25, 2010

    NICE POST, THANKS FOR SHARING.

  • Jenilia12 on Jan 25, 2010
  • Jenilia12 on Jan 25, 2010

    great imagination….
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  • Lily on Jan 26, 2010

    Fantastic!!! What a Great romantic poem! I really love 2 read it, even again & again.T-care always my friend.

  • mkd1788 on Jan 26, 2010

    you expressed well my friend…keep it up

  • T. S. GARP on Jan 26, 2010

    Thx everyone! Thx for the kind words! I try to write short poems about the heart, feelings, and emotions we all have, but they just keep flowing out. Thx again everyone!

  • standingproud on Jan 28, 2010

    Yes in deed when in doubt
    SHOUT IT OUT.
    awesome write my new friend,:)

  • Roe2115 on Mar 9, 2011

    Beautiful poem!

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