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When It Rains It Pours

withheld on Nov 19, 2009
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Poem from an inside reaction.

When it rains it pours,

Feel like jumping, screaming, crying

Oh, how I am shouting inside.

The nerve of some people

It really gets me down

But all you do is look up and frown.

Good ridence I say

Didn’t care that much anyway.

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  • Dark Antirex on Nov 19, 2009

    I liked it,

  • K.Reshma on Nov 19, 2009

    Nice share

  • thestickman on Nov 19, 2009

    :-D

  • Sukhdarshan on Nov 21, 2009

    very well expressed..

  • Vicky Steele on Jan 1, 2010

    I found this piece easy to relate to. I could almost have written it myself, from an emotional perspective, but I wouldn’t have done anywhere near as good a job as you have. Really liked it thanks for sharing your work.

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