When Love Becomes Hate

william rodriguez II on Oct 3, 2008

Tags: hate, Life, love

From love to hate…

I hate to see you again
Because you only caused me pain
I gave you my innermost love and respect
But you only looked upon me as an insect.
Once in my life I became your disciple
Inside my heart I built a majestic temple
I treated you like a beautiful goddess
I cannot control such kind of craziness.
I wished that you’ll be mine upon a shooting star
But you wrecked me like a broken jar
I was wrong to lift you up on high
Because you’re the girl who always tell a lie.
In 6your arms there is no miracle
In my hands you placed a deadly shackle
You imprisoned me in a bleeding castle
I am going mad from the dungeon of hustle.
When loves become hate
I gave up my trust and faith
But it is sad to think that it’s too late
Be3cause of you I entered an empty gate.
Lonesome and dreary without a soul mate
With a piece of shit you made me wait
Because you put me down and made ma fool
Hatred engulfed me like the deepest sea
It will take a long time before I’ll be free.
When I look at myself in the mirror
I think that I lost my honor
I remember you, my greatest predator
You drained all my happiness and vigor.
I regret the day I loved you
Wishing that I have never met you
Between us there is a deadlock
I will never come with you nor take you back.
I hate you! To forgive you is not easy
Shame on you! Your behavior is wily
I wish someone will give you cariño brutal
Because you’re such a fucking animal!

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tracy sardelli on Oct 3, 2008
Well written, so much emotion portrayed, but do not hate, it harms no one but yourself…rather just let go that way you free yourself from the prison that could cripple you.
ebazaar on Oct 3, 2008
Filled with a never ending hatred. From emotional point of view, this is a string of well expressed hatred. It flows just nicely that actually keep the person reading it want to keep on reading. i think because you opt to make the sentences precise and short. Keep it up my friend!
Wild Redhead on Oct 3, 2008
Though the message is clear “hate” I would like to convey that sometimes you can make just as bold of a statement without rhyming..sometimes trying to make everything fit makes the poem lose it’s essence. Poetry isn’t necessarily rhyming words.
Unofre Pili on Oct 3, 2008
The tone is so burning. Well-expressed.
Eunice Tan on Oct 3, 2008
Nicely told.
Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2008
A lot of emotion in this poem.
Rumi on Oct 9, 2008
very well written
Gail Gunter on Oct 29, 2008
“When Love Becomes Hate” is something we all have felt to some degree or another and so we can relate. Thought provoking, for sure. Just remember, feel it, learn from it and set it behind you. Really well done!
goodselfme on Dec 2, 2008
Such emotional messages with much hurt too. I am sorry for this pain . glad you could write about this and share it too with the people that care about you.wishing better days soon my friend.
Chipako on Feb 20, 2009
scatters emotions, well written.
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 22, 2009
What is this I see….have you not channeled hate into an act of creativity? Is that good, bad, or merely profound?
anonymous on Dec 2, 2009
Ahhhhhhhhh, submit this to any place else besides the internet and you’d be laughed at.

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