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When one is angry

He is like a mad guy

You may hear a scream

And the volume is high

When one is angry

He does not look friendly

The reaction is hostile

I would not want to see

When one is angry

Better leave him alone

You may be an eye sore

Sees you he will raise tone

When one is angry

His action you can tell

He may do something

Which can hurt own-self

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  • Val Mills on Mar 16, 2011

    Oooh, creatures to avoid!

  • Sunjhini on Mar 16, 2011

    when one is angry, better to leave him alone :P
    nice write

  • Eldridge on Mar 16, 2011

    haha.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 16, 2011

    good we need humor now more than ever

  • Lady Sunshine on Mar 16, 2011

    Another funny piece! Loved the pics.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Mar 16, 2011

    He he… As the incredible Hulk has warned, ‘You don’t want me angry!!’ Lol, enjoyed the read star :)

  • LCM Linda on Mar 16, 2011

    Star, well-said, very thoughtful, and interesting presentation. I particularly like the cat pic. Well-done. :D

  • Eunice Tan on Mar 16, 2011

    Perhaps we should know the reason of anger?

  • PR Mace on Mar 16, 2011

    Love your humor and my favorite picture was the cat. What a look on his face.

  • fagina on Mar 17, 2011

    :) …Very Nice!!

  • Likha on Mar 17, 2011

    I am definitely not angry at this piece. How can I be? It’s from the funny lady!

  • youthinksokiddo on Mar 17, 2011

    it would be hard to stay angry after reading this poem!
    the photos are so appropriate for the writing.

  • haydenise on Mar 17, 2011

    “When one is angry

    He does not look friendly”

    I like the whole poem! It helped me kind of see myself when I’m angry and realize that what you wrote fits perfectly to an angry person. plus, the photos of the animals make the write-up a feel-good one although the topic is about anger, a heavy emotion. I like it, especially the cat! :)

  • Sharif Ishnin on Mar 17, 2011

    Are those middle fingers made by the late Ah Meng? Hilarious when animals are angry but I would not want to stand in their way.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 17, 2011

    Very true, and those photos are just magnificent.

  • Brewed Coffee on Mar 18, 2011

    Does Star ever get angry? She is always cheerful :-) When I am angry, I am usually silent hahaha! I don’t want to speak because I don’t want to later regret what I said.

  • papaleng on Mar 18, 2011

    Oh, friend, how can I get angry when all I see are very funny photos.

  • Michal Dorcak on Mar 19, 2011

    Good poem. Great pictures, made me laugh :)

  • wonder on Mar 21, 2011

    Nice composition, very angry horse.Please be good when you are angry.

  • CA Johnson on Mar 21, 2011

    Your poem was great. It is hard to be around people when they are angry. It can change your mood too.

  • T. S. Lewis on Mar 24, 2011

    Very good and loved the illustrations.

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