When Phone Gets Silent

Jane Jane on Nov 14, 2009

Tags: mobile, phone, ring tone, silent, undisturbing

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It makes you miss the tone.

I miss my little phone,

Having a cute ring tone.

But I just can’t let it ring

For it has to stay undisturbing.

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Comments (22)

Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009
this was sweet & cute !
K.Reshma on Nov 14, 2009
Very lovely
ken bultman on Nov 14, 2009
Oddly interesting.
drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009
Short yet sweet.
Starpisces on Nov 14, 2009
short but not bad huh? ha ha
by the way, who are you avoiding? Just joking
Will Gray on Nov 14, 2009
Nice!
Jamie Myles on Nov 14, 2009
Cute!
Carol M Creasey on Nov 14, 2009
Very cute, thanks.
diamondpoet on Nov 14, 2009
Very nice.
sandie on Nov 14, 2009
short and to the point, cute little poem that matches your mobile phone.
Teves on Nov 14, 2009
Nice piece Jane…
The Last Ogre on Nov 14, 2009
Cute… Jane Jane. Very cute, liked it.
Snooky on Nov 14, 2009
classy and sassy
Shirley Shuler on Nov 14, 2009
Nice poem, Jane.
vycess on Nov 14, 2009
nice one
Milton H Peebles III on Nov 14, 2009
cute
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Hansika on Nov 15, 2009
nice one…
chitragopi on Nov 15, 2009
Good poem.
Eunice Tan on Nov 15, 2009
Nicely written
Faith Hodge on Nov 16, 2009
This is true also cute!!
cebuanaeyez on Nov 17, 2009
Aaahhh! I have a phone but hardly rings.
Phill Senters on Nov 21, 2009
I can’t stand to let it ring, Just gotta answer the darned thing.

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