A look into, what to do, when she falls in love with you.

Tell her you love her every day

Search for her Happiness in every way

Make love to her every night

Kiss her on the forehead when she holds you tight

Send her flowers for no reason at all

Take her shoe shopping in the mall

Go for walks and go out to eat

Listen to her troubles while rubbing her feet

Be spontaneous and filled with fun

And when all of things up above are done

You Look at this woman, deep in her eyes

And pull out your pocket a big surprise

A Diamond ring fit for a queen.

Then drop to your knees

And say this thing

Will You Marry Me.

The End  (Inspired by S926)

 

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  • albert1jemi on Dec 15, 2009

    wow beautiful way of expressing the love

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 15, 2009

    Lovely and you are so poetic. I think I asked you this question on my last comment. Some guys actually pretend to be someone else and then once the woman falls in love they dump them.

  • Vincent Eggleston Jr on Dec 15, 2009

    You did ask this question. And that’s why I put inspired by S926

  • Kelly Melang on Dec 15, 2009

    Interesting, enjoyed it. Now to that everlasting love after the diamond ring?

  • AlmaG on Dec 15, 2009

    That is so sweet :)

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 15, 2009

    this was very sweet! Thanks for the read!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 15, 2009

    This was enjoyable to read…nice to know that you have the fundamentals right. LOL….:)

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 15, 2009

    I absolutely LOVE this!!! L’amour!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 16, 2009

    cute feelings…i want to experience it..

  • ceegirl on Dec 22, 2009

    If you do this, you have to keep it up.

  • spiritwalker on Jan 20, 2010

    Oh what fairytale love…

    Does this truly exist?

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