A man asking himself when to make the right actions.

When should you share a smile?
When all’s well and you’re doing fine
When all things good and you’re in cloud nine
And when giving love is all worthwhile.
When should you make a sacrifice?
It is when you open your eyes to other’s needs
When you help not for your own interest
And when you always offer yourself for service.
When should you shed tears?

It is when you’re isolated and been rejected
It is when you make mistakes
And to trek a neglected road if requested.
When should you rejoice by winning over challenges?
It is when you stand up with pride, whenever you fall
When you still have strength and patience
After overcoming rejections and some nasty calls.
But when should you gain?
All these life’s feats
When you DON’T QUIT even when
You are trampled upon by others feet.

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Comments (5)
  • Loreta Dorington on Sep 23, 2008

    And when should you make another poem, coz you’re really good in making one. Thanks, this poem is great. I love it.

  • claris on Sep 23, 2008

    nice article, thanks for sharing

  • PR Mace on Sep 25, 2008

    I try to smile at people I walk pass. You never know it may make them feel better. Good work.

  • kate smedley on Jun 10, 2009

    Uplifting poem, I especially like the end.

  • Juancav on Jun 10, 2009

    This is another great poem,now tell me cuando(when).

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