When you feel suddenly sad and the rain comes making you feel glad.

The night sky’s shadow is falling all over me 
The clouds came to bring the sad rain around me
I thought I lost track of this loving feeling made of sunlight 
Swirling in a mist of brilliant dreams now a sudden night

The light was so bright the day before, burning my face
Where did the sun go made of bliss, leaving its trace 
Crystal clear rain drops fell, making its rainbow along the way
Clapping thunder shook to tell, threatening to take me away

The silver lightning blinded and penetrated me 
The rain washing over me till I began to sing out happily
How could I be sad at this water blessing from thee
My life was empty until this rain epiphany came down blissfully

Now she came to understand what was done with clarity
No more tears of rain instead soaking me with your purity
Allowing true love to shine on me through raindrops made of thee
When the rain fell this lonely day I knew love would fine me!

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2011 All Rights Reserved.

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  • sanataryal on Dec 16, 2011

    It sounds like you are singing with rain ,
    very creative and well written .

  • Margaret Boseroy on Dec 16, 2011

    Beautiful poem full of emotion. Wonderful.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 17, 2011

    Such beautiful images portryed in this lovely poem. Well done.

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 17, 2011

    The rain falling is such a wonderful metaphor to use. Enjoyed this piece. ^_^

  • lily on Dec 17, 2011

    Great poetry! Well written, so deep & full of emotion. I loooooove it. Thanks for sharing, take care & have a nice day.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 18, 2011

    such an amazing poem. I like it so much =)

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