This poem is about my thoughts about the afterlife.I try to reflect what will happen in the afterlife.

 

 

When the wind shall blow

It will take me with it

Into the beyond

 

And in the beyond

Two valleys exist

One dry; the other well watered

 

When the wind shall blow

It will take me with it

To one of the valleys

Depending on my weight

And to this life

I shall return not

 

When the wind shall blow

It will take me with it

Into the beyond

 

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  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Feb 11, 2012

    Your poem reflects the inner wish of humanity to continue to exist beyond death. It does represent the fear of death, however, it is true that in one day and age the sun in this sector of the universe will burn out and set free the atomic structure in this area of the galaxy, set free upon the solar wind( unless our sun becomes a “black hole” and the results would be different).

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 12, 2012

    Very spiritual*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

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