I’ll never forget the last day I saw my daddy.
A beautiful Haunting.

Quietly he closed his eyes

to visit a world so deep

They gathered round his bedside

just to watch him sleep

~

Angels moved in beside him,

at his feet and at his head

As his fragile body waited

laying in the bed

~

Shallow breaths still lingering

he was shining in good grace

Moments counted down

till he would see God’s face

~

No one could stand to lose him

yet none would hold him back

For faith wasn’t something

this family ever lacked

~

Tears began to fall

and wailing they did bring

as angels whispered in his ear

then heaven heard them sing

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  • Nightangel on Oct 27, 2011

    That is a tearful poem. You have talent at bringing out feelings in
    your poetry.

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 28, 2011

    Well written..so sad!

  • Grandmommy on Oct 28, 2011

    Thank you both for reading and commenting. Writing my feelings is the only way I know how to express them.

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