First aid poetry.

When you have fever

It’s simple to low the temperature

Mix vinegar and water

And put the mixture on forehead, wrists and ankles

The temperature should be lower in five-ten minutes.

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  • cutedrishti8 on Aug 28, 2009

    Great tips in just few lines…nice work

  • papaleng on Aug 29, 2009

    very nice way to give some medical tips in a brief poem.

  • OhSugar on Aug 29, 2009

    Thank you for sharing this simple, but very vital information.

  • Marie Milton on Aug 29, 2009

    Excellent :)

  • Tanya Varlamova MD on Sep 1, 2009

    Thank you, guys!

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