It dawns…

                     When You Smile

It dawns

When you smile

Red sun comes

Before eyes

Spreads in the heart

Bright sunlight

Write a lovestory

Your eyes write

What moments read

That is so sweet

Two hearts 

Somewhere meet

Same song of love

They both repeat

Deep love then

Becomes more deep

When inside their hearts

To each other they feel

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  • vijayanths on Jan 26, 2012

    good one.

  • quiet voice on Jan 26, 2012

    Very nicely written.

  • donniz on Jan 26, 2012

    nice poem, nice to meet u viviek.. please visit my article :)

  • Eliza26 on Jan 30, 2012

    …very romantic

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