A love poem.

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When you wish upon a star,

dreams can one day come true.

Let’s stand beneath the clear sky,

alone together just me and you.

 

We’ll ask for a night of pleasure,

with sweet caresses full of bliss.

I yearn to feel your tender touch,

I constantly crave your gentle kiss.

 

Tonight our wish will be granted,

I will look upon your handsome face.

You will wrap your arms around me,

hold me close in your warm embrace.

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  • cardy on Oct 29, 2009

    Another lovely write form you!

  • Teves on Oct 29, 2009

    Very nice information provided…
    Pls read my article and leave a comment. Thanks!
    http://authspot.com/poetry/halloween-20/

  • ken bultman on Oct 29, 2009

    A poetic description of a delightful evening in store.

  • neet on Oct 29, 2009

    Romance again…………….Liked it very much.

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 29, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • raman13 on Oct 29, 2009

    excellent

  • ashan1614 on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice write!

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 29, 2009

    Lovely work.

    Christine

  • Aiyanna on Oct 29, 2009

    Can feel the passion!!!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 29, 2009

    A great one

  • diamondpoet on Oct 29, 2009

    How romantic and passionate.

  • STEVE666 on Oct 29, 2009

    Hope your wishes come true.

  • Sourav on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice and romantic as always!

  • honey2licq on Oct 29, 2009

    Great read!

  • alc on Oct 29, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 29, 2009

    Wonderful poem Darla,my fave by you! Excellent flow to your words and some fab imagery!

  • larry84 on Oct 29, 2009

    great write

  • Lee Ness on Oct 30, 2009

    Lovely Poem. I really enjoyed the title and excellent flow and lovely imagery a to it. You are very good on this one.
    Lee Ness Thanks

  • Jane Jane on Oct 30, 2009

    romantic and sweet.

  • xoxo on Oct 31, 2009

    Oh… lovely. Thank you.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 17, 2009

    i love wishin on a start… that’s a kid in me

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 17, 2009

    i mean star not start…

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