A poem.

One more night that you are gone

My heart gets lost and my mind gets torn

It’s colder in here than ever before

A Blanket won’t cut it, I need something more

Your arms around me, I’ll feel the warmth

The love around us, we’ll need nothing more

Time has passed and this is it

Tell me your leaving for a little bit

Hoping to see you soon again

Exchange of kisses and bearing a grin

My heart now happy, and mind amends

I’ll try to sleep but that’s when it begins

I’ll think of you, and then I’m done

One more night that you are gone

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  • BradONeill on Jul 1, 2009

    ahh those lonely nights :( . Good poem!

  • Will Dee on Jul 2, 2009

    Nice write. Lovely flow.

  • Atanacio on Jul 3, 2009

    10/10 yet again Frank :)

  • carlieac13 on Aug 28, 2009

    has a good flow & is a nice poem , good job :]

  • oldster on Sep 1, 2009

    Good poem well told.

  • Liz Sapphire on Sep 13, 2009

    Very good poem. I could totally feel the emotion here. Thanks for sharing

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