Beautiful fantasy…

Deep inside the fantasy world

Where one door leads to another land

Troubles like bubbles disappear

Worries melt like snow in the sun

A story of make believe

Where all sweet dreams come true

A multitude of moon and stars

Rainbows within my reach

Where the horse of a different

Color really exist

No cloud will ever touch the sky

Flowers like magic

Grow without rain

The other me will  stay here forever

In the beauty of this land 

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  • Melody SJAL on Mar 13, 2010

    Love this piece…so smooth and light.

  • swatilohani on Mar 13, 2010

    excellent share

  • drelayaraja on Mar 13, 2010

    Wonderful share

  • standingproud on Mar 13, 2010

    OH Shirley I think the other me lives here to :) .

  • shivaleen on Mar 13, 2010

    Really very beautifull sharing

  • ken bultman on Mar 13, 2010

    Sounds Heavenly.

  • devsir on Mar 13, 2010

    very beautiful

  • giftarist on Mar 13, 2010

    Wonderful write.

  • T. S. GARP on Mar 13, 2010

    Sounds like a wonderful place. Great share!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 13, 2010

    HAVE u ever realised

    that each one of us

    has a different tone

    different mind

    and unique thought

    we all r

    UNIQUE ENTITIES

    EACH ONE OF US

    ur therefore gr88888888888est

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 15, 2010

    It sounds like a magical land.

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