This poem is about the differences I saw from the time of my first visit to Kauai in 2008, to my most recent one, earlier this year. Gone were miles of sugar cane fields. Left behind was fertile farmland just idly and wasting away and now left barren. Riding along the highway from Kauai’s west side to the island’s center of activity in Lihue, the idea of this poem, written as I imagine a local might perceive things, came into being.

Upon open fields, where the sugar cane grew
Dust plumes now twirl, settle, to once again renew
No more cane, none more to be seen
Now field after field, sadly stripped away clean

For so many years, they were all I could see
From mountain’s edge, on down to the sea
My heart took for granted, but now it is sad
If only I knew then, what beauty they had

Traveling silently, passing along empty domains
Remembering times gone by, now nothing remains
Fields gone forever, my eyes sometimes swell
But within saddened hearts, fond memories dwell

Gone now are the fields, not soon to reappear
Now sitting here in silence, with memories most dear
Chances gone, never to return, tearing as I view
The now empty fields, where the sugar cane grew

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  • Nxwtypx on Aug 16, 2011

    I like it, it evokes a sense of loss.

  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 16, 2011

    A good poem Ken. A lot of sugar cane is grown in Queensland where I live, and my father was a cane cutter in his young days. I’ve cut a bit myself.

  • eaa1118 on Aug 17, 2011

    Melancholic… Nostalgic…

    Was it Poe who said that the province of beauty is melancholy…?

    Keep on sharing!:-)

  • wonder on Aug 18, 2011

    True feelings, nostalgic.

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Aug 26, 2011

    nice one

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