What else was the poor girl to do
When guy of her dreams said we’re through
To show her devotion
She could cry an ocean
Or slip him love potion anew

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  • Kharla Jolly on Aug 2, 2012

    Excellent limerick, poor girls with a broken heart! Thanks, for a good share

  • Jswana on Aug 2, 2012

    Well, what’s a girl to do? Just kidding. This is brilliant! :)

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 2, 2012

    Like it.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 2, 2012

    This is wonderful!

  • sha4nny on Aug 3, 2012

    I love it!

  • smokychristine on Aug 3, 2012

    Good metrer, good content, good laugh.

  • Eiddwen on Aug 3, 2012

    A wonderful Limmerick ;great work as always.

  • elee on Aug 3, 2012

    Good article thanks: elee

  • Secre22 on Aug 3, 2012

    Lol…I have to admit when I saw your title I thought it was going to be about valium or something similar!

  • Derdriu on Aug 3, 2012

    Martin, She didn’t choose evasive flight or poor-loser fright. She instead chose fight!
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for the entertaining, imaginative limerick, Derdriu

  • johnmariow on Aug 3, 2012

    Viagra? LOL!

  • Raj the Tora on Aug 4, 2012

    Not getting a lover is not end of life. It hurts badly for sure, but certainly there is lots of love in the air!

  • Stessily on Aug 6, 2012

    Martin, Clever limerick! Resourceful, determined girl. Definitely, “where there’s a pill there’s a way!”
    Appreciatively, Stessily

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