The distance may already be traveled.

Just to the edge of the cliff,

But truly no more.

Touching dangerous limits,

But still holding on.

One’s strength may determine,

Just how far it goes.

But sometimes, the boundary,

Is very much broken,

Without the realization,

That it was, already

Done.

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  • Aiyanna on May 20, 2011

    Endurance and resilience are two qualities which give you the anthems of success despite being on the border of wanting to give up. The Creator is the greatest source of encouragement when you need to come through ans I personally do this have never given up a race halfway without suceeding…. Hang in there and God and Nature with determine the cause, purpose and intent before giving you the will to pursue what you believe in despite all odds.

  • BC Doan on May 20, 2011

    Very cut and dry, tugging and pulling, Quiet Voice. I can’t express how I feel as words seemed to have escaped.

  • galore on May 20, 2011

    Full with hope, Great!

  • quiet voice on May 20, 2011

    …Thanks all, for your comments.

  • isloooboy on May 23, 2011

    Very nice and cool thoughts keep the good work continue, I liked it

  • Tiki33 on Nov 10, 2011

    Expressed with great creativity. Thanks for sharing this.

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