While We Can

Poetic Enigma on Mar 16, 2009

Tags: chances, dance, faith, fullest, fun, Hope, Life, Poetry, remember, time, While we can, young

A poem about living life to its fullest.

We spend our lives feeling that we never get it right
We fail and we fall,
but we got to remember these are the best years of our life

Let’s paint the town red,
Live it up while we are young
Act reckless,
Let’s have some fun

Don’t shake responsibility,
but live it up while we can
We’ll get there in time,
So what is the rush

Lets fall head first and take a chance
Some may fail, while others dance
So let go of worry and hold on to faith
Remember to love while it is not too late

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Christine Ramsay on Mar 16, 2009
I am all for it, though I don’t know if I still have the energy to paint the town red now. I love the poem.

Christine
Kate Smedley on Mar 16, 2009
I love the message in this, you are right, we should stop worrying, have some faith and live our lives.
Michael Degenhardt on Mar 16, 2009
You are so right as stated above. Each day is a gift to us and we should treat it just that way. Very good writing. Michael
Parish Loveless on Mar 16, 2009
This is pertaining to fear of life? That we must make all the mistakes possible before we do get it right, correct? I like that message.
QuinMonty86 on Mar 16, 2009
Love the poem and great advice. I think we keep the inner child in all of us under too tight a rein anyway : ) We need to play more.
Jo Oliver on Mar 16, 2009
Very nice and inspiring message.
papaleng on Mar 16, 2009
lovely and a good message. thanks for sharing.
Melody SJAL on Mar 18, 2009
What a nice message delivered smoothly.
T.Rex McGoogle on Mar 26, 2009
I think that is some of the best advice you can give to anyone.
And I enjoyed the way you expressed.
S A JOHNSON on Apr 1, 2009
I’ll try to keep these in mind. ^__^
BluSphere on Mar 18, 2010
Great article. This is so true. We got to keep the mood up and live our life! If you’re 50 years old and think you’re old, then you will probably wish you were 50 in 10-20 years. You should be happy no matter what age you are, because you’re only getting older.
This was a great article, like I mentioned earlier.

By the way, could you please check out this article? It’s related to yours It’s about “20 Things To Do While You’re Young”

http://socyberty.com/advice/20-things-to-do-while-youre-young/

Thanks,
A W H

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