This just poured out few month ago.

When you come around,
I am broken on the ground.
You call to me like a siren,
Like a sailor sailing the ocean,
I cannot resist your abysmal bliss.
You strip me naked,
To my bare emotions.
My true identity showing,
Despair, self loathing,
Too hideous to be love by anyone.

Whiskey lover, won’t you help me
Hide these imperfections from the world?
I love the way your intoxicating
Kiss feels on my tongue.
The way your warmth
Fills in my imperfections.
Whiskey lover,
I’ve loved you like no other.
When we are one,
It feels like we’re making love.

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  • Collette Edwards on Aug 14, 2009

    never heard alcahol put so well before you have done a wonderful piece of work here very talented, keep them coming :)

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jul 4, 2010

    Like where your mind went with this. Very good.
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

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