My heart gets broken every time I see my father wastes his money for a bottle of whisky or beer. This has been for years. People would ask, "How come you don’t have enough money when your father works abroad and your mother is a nurse?" I opted to answer them through this poem:

WHISKY

whisky, whisky, whisky
what a big trouble you bring
to huge palaces you broke
ah, to you their kings love to cling.

the glass is full, full
so the prince’s future’s blur…
with you the golds are soaked
what a hefty fortune you allure.

what a waste, waste, waste
only the bronzes are left
to the king in his cloak
whisky has ‘tirely swept.

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  • xannedy on Oct 4, 2010

    fef

  • xannedy on Oct 4, 2010

    i agree..but you should also take into consideration what your father feels..sometimes things are not what they always seem..try to open your heart and then who knows..maybe you’ll be able to understand him at some degree

  • smilegelf on Oct 4, 2010

    char kau kag comment king

  • dyxanne on Oct 5, 2010

    hahhha!! yaw saba..ato ato ra na..para murag true ba kuntahay

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