Whispers of Love

Aiyanna on Oct 28, 2010

Tags: feelings, inhibition, Life, love, perspiration, shyness, whispers

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Some people are very shy in expressing their feelings to a person. What is the worst that can happen to them, their overtures get mistaken…

Sprint Poem Series.

Walking

Hand in hand

In the Wilderness together

Stealthy glances thrown both ways

Perspiration on the brow starts to grow

Entrapped feelings strongly wanting to Show

Reserved within the heart for no one to know.

Struggling to come out to let the other person know.

Out of the blue comes a voice

Finding the ear to speak its highs

Listen to what I have to say

Opening up for me is very hardest thing

Venturing into uncharted calm waters now

Enarmouring the feeling which comes out in three words, “I Love You”…

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 28th October 2010

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drelayaraja on Oct 28, 2010
A romantic one
lovestar on Oct 28, 2010
very nice poem no words to say .i have also some plz check.
albert1jemi on Oct 28, 2010
great share
jimbob1 on Oct 28, 2010
Anisha…a beautiful poem somewhat charged with a sense of insecurity until the true feeling is finally expressed…great job…of course I voted that I like this one…thanks for composing and sharing…take care…

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