For anyone who have lost someone dear to them.

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The music whispers softly in my ear.
Reminding me of times I hold so dear.
The melodies are playing, like feathers on a drum.
Whisper to me softly,  of all the joy to come.
The violins and bass, their bows pulled gently by.
So beautiful and pure, I can not help to cry.
As the tears,  roll gently down my cheek, Some one stops to say.
“Is there something I can do?” “No I’ll be O.K.”
It seems I have a problem, with these whispers that I hear.
No-one else can hear them, It’s like they just don’t care.
Yet I long to hear the whispers, getting fainter every day.
They are the music of your voice , before you went away.

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  • Mystical Whitewolf on Apr 1, 2009

    What a beautiful poem………thank you for sharing this with me.

  • Juancav on Apr 1, 2009

    Beautiful and nostalgic poem.

  • hollynoel001 on Apr 1, 2009

    this reminds me of my first husband he died when we were 22 you never forget your first true love no matter how many years have pasted thanks for the great poem and the memories

  • Murky on Apr 1, 2009

    made me cry

  • The Quail on Apr 1, 2009

    Beautiful and nostalgic poem

  • nutuba on Apr 1, 2009

    Getting fainter every day … losing someone is hard.

  • Kimberly Moore on Apr 2, 2009

    Beautiful sad poem! Nicely done:)

  • Chris Stonecipher on Apr 2, 2009

    Beautiful and sad poem. Nice work, thanks for sharing.

  • Michelle on Apr 4, 2009

    Such sad poetry!

  • Alex Alonso on Apr 5, 2009

    In the Portuguese language, they have the word \’saudade\’, which encompasses so many feelings, that are difficult to portray in words, but F. j. has done it here so well.

  • rutherfranc on Apr 6, 2009

    really sad..

  • Joni Keith on Apr 19, 2009

    Another beautiful poem.

  • DA Cournean on Jun 5, 2009

    This is very beautiful!

  • goldchain on Jun 10, 2009

    i was born in 1938 my youngest daughter was bourn 1979 died in 1997 old men do cry too.and it was truly loverly to read .

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 1, 2009

    So beautiful. Liz

  • hollyoel001 on Jul 26, 2009

    very nice

  • cafftee on Aug 5, 2009

    One of the best poems of yours that I have read, I think.

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