I don’t like defining poetry because it packages and reduces its power. So take what personal significance you will from this poem. At its most basic level, it’s about finding your own truth, which lies beyond religious dogma, one’s ideas about spirituality, and everything outside of oneself.

White Crane

They marched back from Varanazi, from Machu Picchu, from Kata Tjuta, from Bodhgaya, from Cairo, from Jerusalem, from Bethlehem, from Mecca, from Nauvoo

Israel by Ula (away).

Image by Ula (away) 

With a belief in a stripped, dull, blunted earth, in toil under endless suns, in the hollow call of the eagle’s wings, in organic to inorganic: in a literal myth rising from the ruins

They told you the Truth in words hot with an inaudible sneer that judges, denies, and guilts the great white crane, standing effortlessly in the still blue pond, singing your name with a silent power that unravels your body:

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dissolves your brain into pure thought, squeezes and rings the violent blood from your heart, plops your intestines into a red, pooling heap before dissipating them into the earth like a mirage on asphalt

So you, too, question your transformation until you grow weary enough of the world that the all of the all of you is enveloped into the entirety of eternity and into the transpersonal personal contained within the rhythm of your breath

Sunset Mandala through a Glass Magnifier by fdecomite.

Image by fdecomite

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  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 19, 2009

    Unique, interesting work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Jul 6, 2009

    To be an unraveled body, with mind of pure thought, and blood devoid of violence…that is true religion…and poetry.

  • WriteEditSeek on Jul 6, 2009

    Moose, absolutely true; beautifully expressed.

  • Dave Crerand on Jul 11, 2009

    was struck by the line “enveloped into the entirety of eternity’
    I found that phrase particularly moving.

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