Spending a holiday on an endless paradise island filled with white sand and plenty of sun.

When you dream of holidays

Your mind is lost in a haze

Filled with memories of play

Postcards sent from an island far away

Telling our friends with happy notifications

With words of love and celebrated descriptions

So many greeting souvenir tomes

You want to stay there and call it home

Nothing matters anymore

But the sound of the distant shore

Looking out at the deep blue sea, together

Making you feel so happy, you want stay there forever

Sitting in such a place that is mellow and fun

Bathing in the bright yellow sun

Making you want to run

You wish we could go exploring everyday

Making the days last all this way

Just walking with you and me

Across the aquamarine sea

An endless journey toward the sun

On our paradise island filled with fun

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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  • sandcastle on Sep 10, 2010

    Love it!

    Just like you, I also wish that we could just spend our life going on vacations with our families, he he he ..

  • Rehoboth on Sep 10, 2010

    $-very nice-$

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 10, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Sep 10, 2010

    Lovely poem. I love the beach and would enjoy spending the entire summer there too, but unfortunately we all have priorities to take care of. Life is a beach!

  • Fassy on Sep 10, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 10, 2010

    I think it makes such a difference who you spend the holiday with. The right person can make this such a memorable time. A lovely poem.

    Christine

  • earthlyjewels on Sep 10, 2010

    I love being on holiday and dread the time it has to end. Nice poem! Thanks for sharing!

  • BRENDAKSHELTON on Sep 10, 2010

    Well written

  • giftarist on Sep 10, 2010

    Lovely piece.

  • MaxBuceo on Sep 14, 2010

    … wow!… i like it!… go on..

  • Kate Smedley on Jan 26, 2011

    It sounds like the perfect place…. lovely poem, wish I was there now!

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