White. Sensory Poem Haiku

momofplenty on Jun 14, 2012

Tags: daisy, girl, marriage, marry, poem, vrigin, white

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White makes me think, of course, of virgin girls, daisies, nature, light….
This is just a little one in a haiku format of five – seven – five.

White.

The virgin girl

daisies laid upon her hair

stands at the altar.

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Philippa Mingins on Jun 14, 2012
I really like this. Short but powerful.
sabanawaz on Jun 14, 2012
lovely.TY
RemieRyan on Jun 14, 2012
Who could shet be??? She must be so lovely!
RemieRyan on Jun 14, 2012
Who could shet be??? She must be so lovely!
vickylass on Jun 14, 2012
Good one. Cheers!
Wrath Warbone on Jun 14, 2012
Lovely poem. Thanks.
Rarity HIll on Jun 14, 2012
White can have other meanings as well. But I like white.
susieb on Jun 14, 2012
beautiful x
Aroosa Gloomy on Jun 14, 2012
Beautiful and what about black??
Eiddwen on Jun 14, 2012
A beautiful Haiku.
JoniJones on Jun 14, 2012
Short one
waflay on Jun 14, 2012
Good one, but I wish I could ask a question..
luthvy on Jun 14, 2012
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evcalangian on Jun 14, 2012
Beautiful and good message.
Sunjhini on Jun 14, 2012
beautifully written
fslshuvo001 on Jun 14, 2012
Yes it is really great.
fslshuvo001 on Jun 14, 2012
Yes it is really great. i am love it to read
Kristie Claar on Jun 14, 2012
lovely
Kharla Jolly on Jun 14, 2012
I can see her standing there, in beauty! Lovely share, good job Eddy.
Lady Sunshine on Jun 14, 2012
Nice.
lauralu on Jun 14, 2012
Very good, how about gardenias and snowballs and white lilacs
^_^
Joe Average American on Jun 14, 2012
A message all the young should adhere to.Beautiful
Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012
Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch
Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012
Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch
Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012
Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch
stevetheblogger on Jun 14, 2012
Great piece of verse left a very vivid picture in my head.
Best Wishes
stevetheblogger
gaby7 on Jun 14, 2012
A nice one for sure!
gaby7 on Jun 14, 2012
Very well written!
KittyK on Jun 15, 2012
Excellent haiku….
elee on Jun 15, 2012
the poem seems a well developed omposite plants having flower heads with well-developed ray flowers usually arranged in a single whorl that is absoultly imaginative and wonderful
zico23 on Jun 15, 2012
awesome
jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 15, 2012
reminds me of my sister in the 1990s
Martin Kloess on Jun 15, 2012
well written – thank you
luthvy on Jun 16, 2012
again come, trims
Chris Bailie on Jun 16, 2012
Beautiful, thank you.
Eunike on Jun 18, 2012
I love it.
Tiki33 on Jun 18, 2012
This poem holds some purity. Thanks for the great share!
Molly Girl 822 on Jun 18, 2012
This one is just plain pretty!

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