White makes me think, of course, of virgin girls, daisies, nature, light….
This is just a little one in a haiku format of five – seven – five.

White.

The virgin girl

daisies laid upon her hair

stands at the altar.

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  • Philippa Mingins on Jun 14, 2012

    I really like this. Short but powerful.

  • sabanawaz on Jun 14, 2012

    lovely.TY

  • RemieRyan on Jun 14, 2012

    Who could shet be??? She must be so lovely!

  • RemieRyan on Jun 14, 2012

    Who could shet be??? She must be so lovely!

  • vickylass on Jun 14, 2012

    Good one. Cheers!

  • Wrath Warbone on Jun 14, 2012

    Lovely poem. Thanks.

  • Rarity HIll on Jun 14, 2012

    White can have other meanings as well. But I like white.

  • susieb on Jun 14, 2012

    beautiful x

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 14, 2012

    Beautiful and what about black??

  • Eiddwen on Jun 14, 2012

    A beautiful Haiku.

  • JoniJones on Jun 14, 2012

    Short one

  • waflay on Jun 14, 2012

    Good one, but I wish I could ask a question..

  • luthvy on Jun 14, 2012

    visit back my article dear

    http://scienceray.com/astronomy/2012-doomsday-and-the-arrival-of-planet-x/

    don forget to coment

  • evcalangian on Jun 14, 2012

    Beautiful and good message.

  • Sunjhini on Jun 14, 2012

    beautifully written

  • fslshuvo001 on Jun 14, 2012

    Yes it is really great.

  • fslshuvo001 on Jun 14, 2012

    Yes it is really great. i am love it to read

  • Kristie Claar on Jun 14, 2012

    lovely

  • Kharla Jolly on Jun 14, 2012

    I can see her standing there, in beauty! Lovely share, good job Eddy.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jun 14, 2012

    Nice.

  • lauralu on Jun 14, 2012

    Very good, how about gardenias and snowballs and white lilacs
    ^_^

  • Joe Average American on Jun 14, 2012

    A message all the young should adhere to.Beautiful

  • Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012

    Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch

  • Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012

    Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch

  • Marquis de Joker on Jun 14, 2012

    Better than lying there I suppose… to die a virgin ouch

  • stevetheblogger on Jun 14, 2012

    Great piece of verse left a very vivid picture in my head.
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • gaby7 on Jun 14, 2012

    A nice one for sure!

  • gaby7 on Jun 14, 2012

    Very well written!

  • KittyK on Jun 15, 2012

    Excellent haiku….

  • elee on Jun 15, 2012

    the poem seems a well developed omposite plants having flower heads with well-developed ray flowers usually arranged in a single whorl that is absoultly imaginative and wonderful

  • zico23 on Jun 15, 2012

    awesome

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 15, 2012

    reminds me of my sister in the 1990s

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 15, 2012

    well written – thank you

  • luthvy on Jun 16, 2012

    again come, trims

  • Chris Bailie on Jun 16, 2012

    Beautiful, thank you.

  • Eunike on Jun 18, 2012

    I love it.

  • Tiki33 on Jun 18, 2012

    This poem holds some purity. Thanks for the great share!

  • Molly Girl 822 on Jun 18, 2012

    This one is just plain pretty!

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