This is a mystery poem.

Hey you unseen, untouched and pure-

Hey you the prettiest of all-

Greatest of all-

You are the all kindest-l

Brilliant is your work- no wonder;

I tried many times to catch you in fault-

Many times wonder how excellently,

Intelligently you do and make things,

Out of nothing.

Hey you-

Your are the most beautiful-

Kind and merciful-

I praise you like no one else-

Even if you are out of my sight;

Your thinking is inside my heart-

My soul, heart and all inside

Beating fast and hard-

If I do not feel you-

I don’t care if you feel the same for me

Don’t you?

Hey you!

You don’t need me as I do-

I don’t want to know-

If I am that worthy to you,

As to me, you-

You the one and only, incomparable and unique

As ever,

I cannot blink, no I did never;

Hey you!

I see around, home and abound,

In the blue and under the water too-

I see you and only you.

When someone compare you with others-

I don’t subscribe that point of view,

Because, I knew you are different

You are you, only you.

Hey you!

Different in all the best ways-

You are brilliant unlike anyone and anything-

I got you comparable beyond,

The most purest of all, and fault free,

Devine and live up above.

You can make whatever you want,

You do whatever you like,

You are the one, who knows everything, anything,

Little thing, big thing, hidden or disclosed.

Hey you!

Have got knowledge, and talent that none of us ever seen or think-

You know the present and past,

You can tell the future and unseen, open or blindfolded-

Root causes of all the good deeds and evils-

I need you, you need no one-

All the tangibles,

On the earth,

Beneath of it, and inside

All do worship you-

Knowingly unknowingly, intentionally and non deliberately-

Because you are the best and most incomparable.

Hey you!

Your power and charisma

Amazed me all around-

Ups and down-

I feel enchanted,

Exclaimed with joy-

When I see you in the rising sun,

Glowing moon, or falling rain;

You the most beautiful and important to me.

Hey you!

Rainbow is colorful,

So is the butterfly,

I wonder how the space and air-

Birds fly!

I see you

The amazing talent -

When the Babui birds make their nests,

I wonder who taught the other birds-

To make their nest with mud-

Carrying in the bills;

You are much higher above prettier than that

Much sweeter and amazingly prettier;

A builder, a thinker

You are the best of the best-

Say my friends agree or not.

You are the one I need-

You are the one for whom I feed-

You depend and need no one-

I need you, we too,

No matter some get it or some don’t

I have no other way, but to utter

I do, I do and I do!

Yet who are you?

I know-

My friends do you? 

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Comments (14)
  • ittech on Dec 8, 2011

    Your the almost well-favoured- and compassionate- appraise you like no one brilliant work nice thanks

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 8, 2011

    beautiful but I’m still nobody:(

  • Rezaul Karim2 on Dec 8, 2011

    Wow what an appreciation!

  • aheed411 on Dec 8, 2011

    Beautiful poem

  • CHIPMUNK on Dec 8, 2011

    A well expressed poem thanks

  • ImKarn23 on Dec 8, 2011

    now that’s love! lovely!

  • gaby7 on Dec 8, 2011

    A nice one here for sure!

  • Angelji on Dec 8, 2011

    I know whom you are talking , it is GOd :) Very divine poem ,like this much !

  • erwinkennythomas on Dec 8, 2011

    captured the spirit of you

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 9, 2011

    very nice piece. glad you shared =)

  • mdrkarim7 on Dec 9, 2011

    Thank you all and especially Angenji!

  • deepak2309 on Dec 9, 2011

    that one long beautiful poem!!

  • LCM Linda on Dec 10, 2011

    A beautiful poem. The one you are talking about is absolutely wonderful.

  • mdrkarim7 on Dec 10, 2011

    Thank you Deepak and Linda…

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