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Who Can Resist? – A Cinquain

Val Mills on Dec 2, 2009
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A cinquain from New Zealand. Pavlova is a meringue like dessert, popular in summer, delicious served with ice-cream.

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who can

resist tempting

ripe red strawberries perched

seductively on pavlova

and cream

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  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 2, 2009

    I can’t resist. I had this yesterday when I went out for a meal. Absolutely gorgeous. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Sharif Ishnin on Dec 2, 2009

    Yummy. Looks really enticing.;)

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 2, 2009

    My family would love this, but I could resist it easily because I don’t like strawberries or meringue. Thanks for the post.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 2, 2009

    That looked delicious and your word describe the flavors.

  • Guy Hogan on Dec 2, 2009

    I have no idea what it is but it looks like it taste good.

  • Val Mills on Dec 3, 2009

    Hi Guy – made with egg whites and sugar – lashings of cream, topped with strawberries. Yum.

  • thestickman on Dec 7, 2009

    OMG Yum! -BYOS! (Bring Your Own Spoon!)

  • J M Lennox on Oct 12, 2010

    Yum! A pav. And now I know what a cinquain is (a five lined poem…..). Well done!

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