Who Do You Think You are?

lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 30, 2011

You are the best gift I ever received when I lost my hope and my dreams are gone.

From the eyes inside my heart, you are my vision that gives me direction.

Don’t ask who you are to me, it’s tearing me apart.

The lamp of your love brightens up the darkness in my soul.

Never ask who you are to me, no angel can deny your worth in my life.

I fear each day; you might fade away,

Reach my hands, touch my heart and say you love me.

Perhaps the shadow of grave will vanish like mirage.

Teach me to live with no fear, even with lies I will be fine.

Who you think you are, you are half of my life,

Remember how you bring back the spark in my dying heart,

Collecting all the happiness and gather the laughter to make me smile.

Now, why you are asking who you think you are to me darling?

Love me, that’s all I ask from you

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Comments (22)

CHIPMUNK on Sep 30, 2011
Brilliantly written and expressed
Aroosa Gloomy on Sep 30, 2011
Lovely post.
girishpuri on Sep 30, 2011
so pure emotional feelings , very impressive , i am impressed , kudos
dazzlejazz on Sep 30, 2011
Beautiful – really beautiful. Well done!
lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 30, 2011
@ Chipmunk,

Thanks for always posting your comment
lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 30, 2011
@Aroosagloomy,

I really appreciate your support
lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 30, 2011
@girishpuri and dazzlejazz,

Thanks for the compliments guys..
pattiann on Sep 30, 2011
Beautiful.
Suni51 on Sep 30, 2011
What a nice poem,great.
lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 30, 2011
@ pattian and Suni,

Thanks a lot
iva75cpb on Sep 30, 2011
So beautiful that it leaves the reader speechless. Wonderful work!
FX777222999 on Oct 1, 2011
You are happy now for someone who replaced your lost love.
Tulan on Oct 1, 2011
Beautiful words, but never lay yourself open to be stepped on.
Socorro Lawas on Oct 2, 2011
very evocative
lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 3, 2011
@iva,

thanks for your comment- what a compliment
VoIP on Oct 3, 2011
I ❣ it! I am a sucker for these types of poems. Fool that I am.
faizalhuda on Oct 3, 2011
very nice
JoniJones on Oct 3, 2011
I like it very good one
lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 3, 2011
@ Bland, faizal and Joni,

thanks for your comment and read guys
angee on Jan 25, 2012
Nice and emo :p
angee on Jan 25, 2012
nice and emo :p
angee on Jan 25, 2012
Nice and emo :p

Hi there!