A simple piece of work to begin with.
This is a poem which might reflect our daily lives.
Clear words and directed thoughts, but worth spending a minute to read it.
Hope you would appreciate the first effort.
Thank you.

Weedy  thoughts ,  material  desire ,

              who  knows  world’s  next  heir ;

Creepy  dimes ,  in-borne  lust ,

               who  knows  love should stand at first ;

Working  bees  heading  to  be  queen ,

                who  knows  royal – jelly  cant  stand  a  holy  bean ;

 Flocks  of  sheep ,  masters  evil ,

                 who  knows  seed  of  serenity  hidden  in  each  devil ;

Depressed ,  glad ,  nervous ,  curious ,

                 these  mixed  emotions  make  the  time  fast  and  furious ,

Who  knows  where  this  world  heads  to ,

                 all  away  from  divine ,  both  me  and  you ;

One  reaps  what  one  sows ,

                 but  when  its  time  for  good  deeds ,  we  all  neglect  saying -

                                            “  WHO KNOWS…!!!!  “

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  • Manroz on Aug 5, 2009

    hmmmmmm……….gud effort…….
    girl…..ending ws best……keep it up…!!! gud going….
    hope u ll cum up vid even better stuff next……..
    ALL THE VRY BEST…..

  • nishant on Aug 5, 2009

    zyada kuch samajh nahin aaya..par acha hai…daz very nice ya ..gud work …grt effort..thodi simplified english use kar layi..nxt time….shakespeare di tee….

  • ravneet sandhu on Aug 11, 2009

    its awesome gurl

  • rajat on Aug 15, 2009

    very gudd yaar!!

  • marvelTHEwords on Aug 24, 2009

    thnx everybody……

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