What forbidden fruit are you talking of man /woman?

      

       Who said it was ever forbidden

 

       Forbidden fruit never was forbidden

Nor will it ever be

Only some folks thousands of years ago

Wanted you to hold it

That’s all

To the forbidden fruit

Even kids

Now love it

Don’t you?

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Comments (12)
  • Teves on Oct 27, 2009

    Nice one…

  • cebuanaeyez on Oct 27, 2009

    quite fascinating!

  • ceegirl on Oct 27, 2009

    good one

  • Frosty Johnson on Oct 27, 2009

    Everything tastes better when its forbidden

  • larry84 on Oct 27, 2009

    Forbidden is never forbidden only lost!!!!!

  • Nydia Esther on Oct 27, 2009

    nice! :)

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 27, 2009

    papaya, also known as forbidden fruit!

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Oct 27, 2009

    sure I love it……..

  • chitragopi on Oct 27, 2009

    A different angle. Nice poem.

  • martinpm on Oct 28, 2009

    nice view, liked it

  • Kaavs on Oct 28, 2009

    Twisting a person\’s views to make them think…in fact an apple a day keeps the doctor away…

    Liked it!
    Cheers,
    Kaavs

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 28, 2009

    Nice poem.

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