Who, what, when, where, why poems should be five lines long. The poem should tell a story or give a strong picture of someone or something. Each line should answer one of the "W" questions in the order listed above. When you read the poem it should sound like two sentences put together.

Example:

“Waiting”

WHO: The old man

WHAT: sat alone

WHEN: on a sunny afternoon

WHERE: on his front porch.

WHY: He was enjoying the breeze and drinking ice tea.

(By: H.Renz)

“Little Boy Waiting”

The little boy

crawled into bed

this evening

at a strange place.

He was waiting for his mother to return.

Copyright © 2012 Kristie Claar

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  • Rosettaartist1 on Feb 4, 2012

    Unique interesting

  • BANASCO on Feb 4, 2012

    nice one!

  • Nidhi Rai on Feb 5, 2012

    Very interesting.

  • jessyca lukovic on Feb 5, 2012

    awesome

  • realityspeaks on Feb 5, 2012

    Interesting.

  • vijayanths on Feb 5, 2012

    Interesting share.

  • avissado on Feb 6, 2012

    very interesting and great share

  • Martin Kloess on Feb 6, 2012

    very good

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 6, 2012

    Thanks for all the wonderful comments, God Bless!

  • sheilanewton on Feb 6, 2012

    Superb. Simply superb.

  • PruandMe on Feb 7, 2012

    I’m lovin’ it! Well done.

  • marqjonz on Feb 8, 2012

    The 5 w’s idea sounds like an interesting way to put together a cinquain.

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 8, 2012

    Thank you sheilanewton, pruandme, and marqjonz. God Bless!

  • mevlanamarshall on Feb 9, 2012

    that’s just a superb idea. you got talent!

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 10, 2012

    Thank you mevlanamarshall!

  • Martin Kloess on Feb 11, 2012

    waiting for new stuff

  • Sandeep Sunny Jasrotia on Feb 12, 2012

    Hi kristie…Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhat a peom…

  • rgreenfield on Feb 12, 2012

    wow, such interesting observation…

  • ittech on Feb 14, 2012

    Beautiful thoughts.

  • PaulB on Feb 14, 2012

    Neat.

  • freebird989 on Feb 17, 2012

    Good one!

  • girishpuri on Feb 18, 2012

    And triondians waiting for remarks….lol

  • Kristie Claar on Mar 3, 2012

    Thanks all, God Bless!

  • AmosTheCat on Mar 4, 2012

    I had never heard of these, but good exercise.

  • Yamin2011 on Mar 6, 2012

    the copyright seal looks funny… lol :P

  • Martin Kloess on Mar 9, 2012

    supporting you.

  • Kristie Claar on Mar 12, 2012

    Thank you all for viewing and commenting. God Bless!

  • castleboundbook on Mar 25, 2012

    Nice! I may have to try this form of poem.

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