A poem about the fear that you have when you begin to fall for someone again. You feel as though you have become cruel, with the person that hurt you before, and you don’t want to treat them the same way you were treated.

If this were a dream you would be mine.

You’d see me and think of no one else

We’d talk about nothing as long as forever

I would be able to open myself

and believe that I’m worth something.

But I look in the mirror and I think of the other

I’m becoming him in every way 

When I speak to you, it’s his voice

When I listen to, look at, and feel you

It’s like I’m not in my own body

And it’s terrifying because you don’t deserve

what happened to me, to happen to you.

If this were a dream I would be yours.

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Comments (8)
  • Joanna on Jan 30, 2012

    This is really good, I know what it’s like to feel as though you’re becoming the person that hurt you.

  • Kirsten on Jan 30, 2012

    I love the comparison to dreams.

  • Penelope on Jan 31, 2012

    I love this

  • Nellie on Feb 3, 2012

    Great work

  • Phyllis on Feb 7, 2012

    Beautifully written

  • Alice on Feb 9, 2012

    Beautiful

  • Kenneth on Feb 18, 2012

    It’s hard not to become such a guarded person after you’ve been wronged

  • Dustin on Mar 23, 2012

    Wonderfully written

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