A lone stranger in a strange world… The first time I found a new thing…

I got exposed to a new gadget
I got familiar with a new place
The only thing that was never clear
Was, why I thought this thing was a dear!

The place was so eye catching
But the people were very MEAN!
How could something that seemed so exciting
Turned out so lean?

I was so innocent
I was so pleased
I had opened a new world, only with an inexperienced key

Wait! There was a big problem
This new world was not my friend
It was full of CRAZY PEOPLE
Just waiting for my POST to turn into a HUGE PIG PEN!

They laughed at nothing
They mocked and turned a simple question
Into a long idiotic thread

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It is only a pity the creator of this thing
Does not have a clue
Or maybe he knows but ignores
Only because he pities them

Now that you know my awful experience
I don’t have to tell you the name of this DEN
You might have gotten your experience
Probably with the worst smelling STENCH

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  • W.C. Barron on Sep 10, 2009

    Great job Sasha! WOW! Now I really know why literature was one of my weakest subjects in school. Thanks for the bold words within your text, I was able to unstand most of what you were saying here. Super, keep up the unique style….

  • Hugo La Rosa on Sep 10, 2009

    Excellent Sasha Brown. That was a great poem. I myself don\’t write everyday, but I do write at least every week. And no, I\’m not a teacher; I\’m a Journalist. Regards, and keep up the good work,

    Hugo

  • Sterling Christianson on Sep 14, 2009

    Sasha…read my recent post The Forums Filthy Few….we’re on the same page my friend. I too have experienced this misfortune and may turn it into my new serial. Let’s wait and see. LOL….your a great poet and this piece displays your finely crafted talents. Great job with a hideous thread of idiocy.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 15, 2009

    Yes indeed, communication is a risky business.

  • martie on Oct 29, 2009

    really wonderful!

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