A song I made up and actually finished :)

i feel the wind

coming through my hair

and everywhere

there’s air

but for some reason

i cannot breathe, and

i dont know where to go

and i don’t know

so i think i might be going crazy

’cause i can’t get my mind off of you lately

and I’m not sure where i went wrong

and why can’t i move on

i look up at the sky

and all the stars

are shining with shimmering lights

that dont seem very far

but for some reason

i cannot reach them

i don’t know why

i guess they like to hide

so i think i might be going crazy

’cause i can’t get my mind off of you lately

and I’m not sure where i went wrong

and why can’t i move on

i feel the wind

blowing right through me

and i feel the air

that i can finally breathe

but for some reason i can’t expalin

this day

isn’t like any other day

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  • Noeal V on Sep 9, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 9, 2010

    You express your feelings so well in this song.

    Christine

  • VanillaLatte33 on Sep 9, 2010

    thank you, I wrote this song a while ago but recently finished it, I know it’s not much, but it’s the first that I’ve finished :)

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