Sometimes our words can hurt or hinder others, who may not understand our purpose for the verbal attack. They may have enough courage to ask, “why did you say what you said”?


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Did you say what you said, so that I would lower my head? If you did, then I am sorry, I will raise it instead.

Did you say what you said, to bring my spirit down? If you did, then I am sorry, My spirit is so high I feel as if I could fly.

Did you say what you said, so that I would quit? If you did, then I am sorry, you see my fire is already lit. Now is no time for me to quit.

Did you say what you said, so that I wouldn’t excel? If you did, then I am sorry, I will prevail. My mind is not for sell.

Did you say what you said, to use your words like and arrow, that would kill the little sparrow? If you did, then I am sorry, I am still walking the straight and narrow.

Did you say what you said, because I don’t want to walk your road? I want to walk the one few people chose. If your words were meant to destroy, I am sorry, I didn’t fall for your ploy.

As I contemplated hate, the Lord whispered in my ear and said, “meditate, dedicate, appreciate, then see if I won’t liberate you.

Say what you will, I am free and soon I hope you too will be.

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  • papaleng on Mar 23, 2009

    nice one.

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 23, 2009

    Great work! Nicely done. Thanx for sharing this great poem.

  • Susan Keeping on Mar 23, 2009

    I really like this one.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 23, 2009

    There are far too many people who think it is their role in life to put people down. I pity them. They are the ones with the problem. A great piece.

    Christine

  • STEVE666 on Mar 23, 2009

    This is very good and well-written piece.

  • kate smedley on Mar 23, 2009

    Heartfelt piece.

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 23, 2009

    Beautiful attitude. you go girl.

  • Likha on Mar 23, 2009

    Skillful work. Now you don’t have to ask why I said what I said.

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 23, 2009

    Very nice, strong work.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • monica55 on Mar 23, 2009

    I like your message: Nothing that the mean spirited person do will ever break you down, and that how we sll should be. Hold you head in spite of the evil one.
    Monica

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 24, 2009

    wow! this is nicely done! keep it, OHsugar!

  • Pusing40 on Mar 24, 2009

    Wow! Girl you can blow. The message is clear, no one will shake your confidence.

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 25, 2009

    I like this one, you come across as very strong and determined.

  • Vickie C Jordan on Mar 25, 2009

    Hi Ohsugar! What a great article! How easily people can say something that can devestate another person for a long time. We have to have the courage to know who we are in spite of others opinions. I love this article!

  • loafer on Mar 26, 2009

    Sometimes it’s hard to go against the wind but it doesn’t matter as long as you believe in what you’re doing….nice thoughts.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 26, 2009

    I will never say nothing ,
    which will make sugar,
    at all bitter,
    i will always say something ,
    that will make my sugar
    a bit more sweeter

    lovely sugar,
    adds on to my cup of tea,
    i love you poetry

    LH

  • OhSugar on Mar 26, 2009

    Thanks everyone, I send you much love.

  • Debra. on Mar 28, 2009

    A very inspirational and powerfully driven piece! Well done, OhSugar!

  • Fresh Writing on Mar 28, 2009

    Excellent work OhSugar; you have penetrated the depths of the human mind and spirit-superb advice!

    If only more of us would follow it…

    -Fresh Writing

  • cleblanc on Mar 31, 2009

    this is really good and has taught me something. thank you for writing it. i like this.

  • Becky Sears on Apr 1, 2009

    Wow! Strong will to be who you were meant to be. Good example to many, who walk in fear of others.

  • Amsky on Apr 3, 2009

    Yap! You did a good job well said and inspiring statement of yours…

    Amsky

  • pushing40 on Apr 10, 2009

    Wow! A lady with a strong will to be herself. Great job.

  • Jenny Heart on Apr 29, 2009

    Your writing is excellent. Everyone need to read this one. It makes us stand up and just take notice. I love it!

  • sincereone on May 12, 2009

    The darn thing people say can make you crazy, depressed, or just don’t care, I personally just don’t care what they say. I am going to keep it real for my life. Great job.

  • stillovingu on May 13, 2009

    Good question to ask if someone is trying to get under your skin. Put them on guard and they will back down.

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