A lover deserts you ere the love starts.


Why

 

 

Why did you make friends with me?

If only my heart

You had to break finally

Why did you come into my life?

So strangely

Why did you leave so abruptly?

So suddenly

 

Why did you come?

At all into my life unknowingly

You return to me those stolen moments

Of joy and sorrow

I did share

Come back tomorrow

If for my love you care

 

No sex, only friendship

Is all I ask?

Don’t ever again

Wear a mask

Of glowing sadness,

Hidden face

Oh my life

Why did you again retrace

Those lost and forgotten moments

Gone past

Come return to me my love at last

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Comments (15)
  • Teves on Nov 16, 2009

    I love your poems lovely….

  • Kip Spleen on Nov 16, 2009

    Incredibly passionate verse.

  • AlmaG on Nov 16, 2009

    Very nice poem LH ^_^

  • Noodleman on Nov 16, 2009

    That was very nice =)

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 16, 2009

    Excellent poetry. But why even bother with someone who is not being honest. Only fake people wear masks L.H.

  • wonder on Nov 16, 2009

    Stirring !

  • writeme on Nov 16, 2009

    very good poem

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 16, 2009

    good expressions… and the feeling of being betrayed has been finely jotted down….

  • svishnugopal on Nov 16, 2009

    wonderful write…thanks for posting..

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 16, 2009

    A very emotional poem

  • Kristina Angel on Nov 16, 2009

    Nice one

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 16, 2009

    Very touching.

  • papaleng on Nov 17, 2009

    heartfelt one, my dear.

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009

    another lovely one, i am glad that i can once again comment on your work.. :)

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 6, 2009

    i love this one a lot, LH!

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